The Wind That Left My Eye

I fell in love with the most amazing guy
I was dumb enough to tell him goodbye
He made me smile
Even though my clothes were out of style
He made me laugh
To where I felt like I was split in half
He loved me
But I was to dumb to believe
I wanted him in my life
Even though I am no longer going to be his wife
He wanted to give me a ring
But I wasn't ready for that type of thing
I want to tell him I miss him
I just don't know where to begin
Breaking up with him was a mistake
But I needed a break
I want him back
He just doesn't believe that

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Date: 12/19/2020 2:03:00 PM
...so sorry it is not Sage
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Sage Wrobel
Date: 12/19/2020 2:19:00 PM
Thank you I appreciate it
Date: 12/19/2020 1:42:00 PM
Such a hard position to be in; stinks to learn what we want and need the hard way. Hope this is fiction. Take care Sage :)
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Sage Wrobel
Date: 12/19/2020 1:45:00 PM
Thank you for your comment but no this is not fiction
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