The Wind Is Isolde - Part 2

 Continued from Part 1

The orphans and widows lean into the breeze
watching horrified hangmen descend to their knees 
for the angel of mercy’s no longer inclined
to forgive vengeful  phantoms (oh Furies of night!) ,
                                       I’ll not leave you behind.

The bandits are brazen, the highwaymen lurk,
some imbibing dark brews of a hag’s handiwork,
mostly gulping from goblets like goblins maligned.
Woman! Widen your wings, catching wisps of the wind
                                       I’ll not leave you behind.

The lepers laugh, leaping from tombstones of steel 
chasing rollaway caskets on luminous wheels;
while their shadows shake, shrouded, twixt trees intertwined,
twisted time melts at midnight, take hold of my hand,
                                       I’ll not leave you behind.

The gremlins grope, grinning face down in the dust,
while the sprites and the pixies are watching nonplussed.
They sling bolted arrows at spectres enshrined
within winds somewhat flustered, just fly from your fears 
                                       I’ll not leave you behind.

The tattered toy teddies and raggedy Anns
have escaped to the skyways in kid caravans
but now, spellbound by fancies, know not that they’ll find
their parade’s evanesced into echoes of dawn –
                                       I’ll not leave you behind.

The wind’s my enchantress, beguiles and commands
me to search for my fortune in faraway lands
and whispers her mysteries of passions entwined,
for the wind is Isolde – unfurling my sails 
                                        I’ll not leave you behind.
 
 End
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 7:21 PM
well SPLENDID!!! and the heroine is a woman! Light & Love
Tsiluma Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 1:51 AM
Beautiful! 'The wind is a woman', ha! No wonder she's so tempestuous. This is really amazing Terry! You've followed through very nicely. Very well done.
Mac Donald Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 5:26 AM
Ah, you've followed through on the first with more outstanding imagery, Terry...this is stunning. Love the last stanza, though the others are equally as captivating. Best wishes, Mikki
Rzhepishevska Avatar
October 26, 2012 at 12:53 AM
I think I have also found a gorgeous poet. Thank you so much. Its a great pleasure to read your poems. With warmest wishes, Larisa
Burd Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 5:51 PM
your writing captures the reader immediately. I have found a new favorite poet. Can't wait to read the rest of your work.
Kendrick Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 11:44 AM
Interesting Halloween work..Wouldn't want to be left behind with all those monsters..Thanks for stopping by with well wishes..Sara
Kearley Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 12:10 AM
Well! Good thing I wasn't left behind! Another fine write I must say.
Uche O. Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 11:30 AM
Nice lines....... Scrambled all to image, you are good handling those images, it brings live to art.
Horne Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 1:21 PM
beautiful writes here, my friend - loved parts one and two. congrats on all your wins : )
Collins Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 8:33 AM
hi - sent you a soup mail. kathy
Onclaud Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 8:01 AM
stunning storyline with metaphors that depict the pathos of your theme, terry.. reminds me of tristan and isolde.. fantastic!..:) huggs!
Nutter Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 7:54 AM
After part one, part two was a no brainer had to read. Excellent
Cavanaugh Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 6:45 AM
Another good poem Terry, and from kathryn collins comment "Edgar Allan O'Leary" It is so true. You have been influence by Poe as much as I have been influenced by Ogden Nash.
May Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 9:32 PM
an enchanting write Terry.....hope there is a part 3 to solve the mystery of isolde....or is it already solved...thanks for sharing...love...Joseph
O'Leary Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 9:38 PM
Joseph, there is no part 3... however, you might have a look at "Isolde - If Only You'd Be Mine".... (maybe that's part 0...)
Anderson-Throop Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 6:43 PM
Swashbucklers beware.... Love the last verse..... would like to jump on your ship... (just a note: your verbs are not always in agreement...might strengthen your writing to pay attention to this detail.) Victoria
Guzzi Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 5:26 PM
wowser..a grande slam..I love getting on a tear like this only trouble is you can't get it all on one page! Have you heard of St. Catherines Wheel? very interesting look it up! ;) Light & Love
Collins Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 8:27 AM
Harry Horsman said it best "one could live within this poem" It's truly a whirlwind of images each swirled away by the next in gusts. "In vampire steeples, cathedral clocks tick Like the droplets of wax neath a pale candle’s wick." Within the night’s terrors its flame is enshrined But the glim is fast fading – So scatter your cares I’ll not leave you behind. Edgar Allan O'Leary's Masque of the Red Death. love Kathy
Horsman Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 2:11 AM
wonderful Saga, gives one so many aspects of thought, will read this again and then more, one could live within this poem,,,,
Grisetti Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 6:36 PM
Great story. Enjoyed every verse.
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