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The Wilting of the Radiant Rose

Asian sun rises from the east Rose seeds beneath the fence For these petals are released The perfumed smell of the rose lingers The scene is hailed by the divine Asian sun rises from the east Although the rose has passed Its impression will remain For these petals are released Death has come and the rose withers No other like it will be spotted Asian sun rises from the east The rose has moved on to another place Tunnel of light is iridescent For these petals are released The Sun sets in the West The rose is laid to rest Asian sun rises from the east For these petals are released

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Date: 11/21/2023 10:40:00 AM
Hi Rukhsana. Enjoyed your villanelle. Thanks for sharing. I've tried the villanelle form a few times and find it tricky. Best wishes, Tony.
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Rukhsana Afridi
Date: 11/22/2023 1:53:00 AM
Thank you, Tony.
Date: 10/11/2023 6:26:00 AM
Interesting metaphor for death. While I don't believe in a releasing, as it were, I do believe in hope. I'm surprised this excellent write hasn't gotten more attention. Perhaps if you interact more
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Date: 10/11/2023 7:17:00 AM
Thank you Tom for your kind and supportive response. Yes, maybe if I interact more. I agree. I’m so happy you enjoyed my poem. Thanks again Tom!

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