Billie Jama Poet Haiku

The Willows Weep

                             cascading                              
  l   l
  i       o
 w          w
                   w
                        e 
                            e
                                  p 
                                     s
                            beneath 
                    frost-laced
          velvet firmament

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Ink Empress May 12, 2025 at 3:34 AM This is beautifully done sis! I love the way you always arrange your words! And the way you’ve shows cascading willows weep, is stunning along with the last line! Congrats on your top win in brians! Well deserved! So good to see you doing these hikus! Sending you light