The Will of Faith

I
know
deep are
the shadows
of darkness, but let
the grim night fall and I will light 
the candles of hope. I know high are the ideals
of aspirations, but let me dream a dream and I will soar on the wings of the will.


"Fibonacci" contest by rob carmack
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 10:50 PM
ABDUL, Congratulations on your awesome Fibonacci win :):):) Luv ~LINDA~
Canama Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 4:46 AM
A wonderfully, crafted poem of faith. Congrats, Abdul.
Kendrick Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 9:19 AM
Depth rides high in this winning work..Congrats..Sara
Merryman Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 5:13 PM
Abdul, congrats on your win with this inspirational fibonacci! Kim
Guzzi Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 8:52 AM
Faith is a blessing. Congratulations on your win. Light & Love
Nance Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 8:34 AM
I love that- let me dream a dream and I will soar on the wings of the will- that is wonderful. Very many grats on your win!
Mandani Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 9:35 AM
Thanks Casarah. Appreciate much.
A  Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 11:51 PM
ABDUL, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Fibonacci WIN! ~SKAT
Mandani Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 9:35 AM
Thanks a lot SKAT.
Roper Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 10:55 AM
Congratulation on this wonderful win a 7
Mandani Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 9:34 AM
Thanks Eve.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 7:33 AM
I love this one. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Big Smiles, Dane Ann
Mandani Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 9:12 AM
Thanks Dane. Appreciate much.
Callus Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 7:19 AM
Congratulations, Abdul! Hope and Faith when combined together can work wonders! // paul
Mandani Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 8:55 AM
You got it, Paul!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 3:04 AM
i like the use of oxymoron as poetical device here.. the imagery plus the wisdom here.. :)! KUDOS!// olive eloisa
A. Sharma Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 12:46 AM
How wonderful ! Big congrats !!
Mandani Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 9:37 AM
Thanks Upma.
Carmack Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 8:25 PM
Even if never realized, always fuel to get there. Congrats Abdul.
Mandani Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 8:56 AM
Thanks rob, you hit the nail on its head. Appreciate much.
Allison Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 8:23 PM
dropping back with my congrats Abdul:-) Hugs jan xx
Shaw Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 7:34 PM
Congratulations on your win, Abdul!! Beautiful words to enjoy. Hugs, Kimberly
Mandani Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 8:55 AM
Thank you, Kimberly.
Allison Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 12:25 PM
I love the imagery here with the light and dark and the candle of hope -beautifully penned :-) Good luck:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
Mandani Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 9:32 AM
Thanks Jan.
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