The Wilderness Part 2

Why not build a building of the real self,
You mind has jumped off it’s cliff,
Having nothing left of itself,
With the old man dead,
Where is the dread,
Live life instead!

There is nothing left,
But God within myself,
For I have been in a hassle,
In my worldly castle with my selves!

Here is the way it goes in hassle’s,
Worldly castle,
My aware said, I do declare,
To my mind, in times line,
Who said to my brain,
You’re lame,
Now my lame brain,
Said, to my flesh,
You’re the very last,
To see,
Twiddle Dee,
The mind’s creation for you to be!

Now that we see our devils,
Lets get our lives on the level,
For there is no devils,
Only a house divided,
Has been decided!
You can now see the cure,
That has been provided!

Just your outer parts out of line,
Created a wilderness in your mind,
In life’s time line!
So sit and pine no more,
No need to walk the floor,
Your mind created your life’s W- - - e!
Read about it in your bible some more,
Living with her has been such a chore,

So now I’ve opened the real door,
Of my inner world to explore,
It’s the real world,
Not the world in peril,
But my real pearl, of God’s world! 

One soul, one heart at a time,
With love’s kind,
Dane & Carolyn!
Myself I can change,
You, I cannot rearrange,
My love I can give to you,
But I can’t live it through you!

Once enough members of life’s city is built,
The whole world will tilt,
Toward perfection,
In love’s direction,
Toward the city’s election,
Of a world of perfection!

In the building of the city,
Black stones are a pity,
White stones build the city,
The carnal mind is a pity,
From the white of the hearts,
Comes a perfect city!

6-22-09 johnmosesfreeman@yahoo.com

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/24/2011 10:46:00 AM
Congrats Moses on the featuring of "The Wilderness Part 2" being featured. Vince
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Date: 9/21/2011 3:43:00 PM
Congrats Moses on featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful write to share my friend..luv..
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Date: 9/21/2011 8:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Moses. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2009 12:14:00 PM
great penmanship, such a creative, intriguing way with words.....:JP)
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Date: 6/23/2009 8:19:00 PM
Well penned my friend...Lots of Love, Misty
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Date: 6/23/2009 7:24:00 PM
Okay, I'll play....If you were a teen when twisting was keen, I was a sprout when the twist and shout came out.:))-AA by the way..AA stands for Always Alexandra, Sandra for short.
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Date: 6/23/2009 6:06:00 PM
I knew a John Moses Freeman in High School, he was our editor of the High Schools newspaper. Are you he? Great write by the way and welcome to the soup!-AA note especially to you: Yes
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Date: 6/22/2009 1:33:00 PM
holy cow!!! John!!! this is my favorite poem of yours yet!!! keep rollin on! brother, jim
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