The Whooshing Sounds of Victory

The whooshing yelling screams rewarding moments of hard work

with taunting flashes and sounds of victory

as surging emotions pill up the pressure

one after the other 

on top of one another

all the people sing songs of  invigoration persistent in victory

that emerge in bursts of consolating packages

while tears of joyful happiness and hope emerge energized 

at the glory in victory over all

the sacrifices of diligence made

we all share as beneficiaries 

that in the end all efforts burnt were not at all in vain

nor wasted

but harbored in brevity, 

concluded, 

summed up 

and are present in the

whooshing noises of victory 

the people respectfully and wholeheartedly disperse singing to
blissful pieces……






Inspired by Invictus.......
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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