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The Whole Picture

I wish I could just walk Right beside you through life And the beyond, vast land that knows No end. Walking Through the valleys And the hills, the rivers And the plains, not letting go of Your hand. Knowing That when two see As one, the picture seen Is much wider, therefore carries Great hope. Your view Added to mine My view added to yours Has the scope of eternity Signed in. For love Has the power To unite two in one And complete becomes understood Truly. By CarolineCécile Copyright © 10.31.10

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 3/12/2011 5:35:00 AM

This is beautiful, Carolyn. The first poem I'd opened coming on here, and I struck gold! Often I think that God's hand reaches far, it was as though I'd been pulled here.:) Wishing you the best! Mikki

Daver Austin

Date: 2/3/2011 10:20:00 AM

"Complete becomes understood." I like this - a clear definition of love, and much more. Love, Dave

Anthony Beesley

Date: 1/19/2011 4:35:00 PM

good work

Gert W. Knop

Date: 11/12/2010 8:44:00 AM

What great an beautiful thoughts in your poem, Caroline! Thank you so much for sharing this write on Soup with us! Alles gute und ein schoenes Wocheende, Gert

Honesty Oimbo

Date: 11/8/2010 12:29:00 AM

truly it a brilliant piece

Jay Del Fierro

Date: 11/5/2010 11:11:00 AM

very beautiful...sometimes,i think that,thats what true holiness really is..."whole-ly-ness",suppose,only an enlightened being,can feel such beauty,even in our sense of imperfection...very nice,i'm still smiling at this moment of gracefulness...peace , jay

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 11/2/2010 10:12:00 AM

Dear Caroline, This takes my breath away in all its beauty..... As Always, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/1/2010 5:30:00 PM

This is the type of love we all seek, Caroline, when "two" become "one" and know they will walk hand-inhand together. Such a wonderfully uplifting description of a couple who enjoy "the whole picture" together. Beautiful, Caroline! It's so nice to see you writing again and sharing your work with us. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/1/2010 12:13:00 PM

It was my pleasure to read your amazing writing today Caroline. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/1/2010 4:04:00 AM

Good work in this one..Two becoming one is very hard..It takes years of working at it..Sometimes on some differences we just have to agree to disagree...Enjoyed reading your work ..I am glad that you wrote about this topic and I am glad that I chose it to read this A.M..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 10/31/2010 7:38:00 PM

Well done, insightful and romantic, Caroline

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/31/2010 5:33:00 PM

Nice write well worded on The Whole piocture, Caroline

Anthony Beesley

Date: 10/31/2010 5:30:00 PM

love it very much

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/31/2010 5:10:00 PM

Enjoyed reading today!!

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 10/31/2010 4:41:00 PM

"That when two see As one, the picture seen Is much wider" What a beautiful whole view from a beautiful and talented poetess - Caroline Cecile! That second half of your soul must be very lucky having you. Love, Iolanda