Caroline Cécile Delacroix Poet Cinquain

The Whole Picture

I wish
I could just walk
Right beside you through life
And the beyond, vast land that knows
No end.

Walking
Through the valleys
And the hills, the rivers
And the plains, not letting go of
Your hand.

Knowing
That when two see
As one, the picture seen
Is much wider, therefore carries
Great hope.

Your view
Added to mine
My view added to yours
Has the scope of eternity
Signed in.

For love
Has the power
To unite two in one
And complete becomes understood
Truly.

By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 10.31.10

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Michelle Mac Donald March 12, 2011 at 5:35 AM This is beautiful, Carolyn. The first poem I'd opened coming on here, and I struck gold! Often I think that God's hand reaches far, it was as though I'd been pulled here.:) Wishing you the best! Mikki

Daver Austin February 3, 2011 at 10:20 AM "Complete becomes understood." I like this - a clear definition of love, and much more. Love, Dave

Anthony Beesley January 19, 2011 at 4:35 PM good work

Gert W. Knop November 12, 2010 at 8:44 AM What great an beautiful thoughts in your poem, Caroline! Thank you so much for sharing this write on Soup with us! Alles gute und ein schoenes Wocheende, Gert

Honesty Oimbo November 8, 2010 at 12:29 AM truly it a brilliant piece

Jay Del Fierro November 5, 2010 at 11:11 AM very beautiful...sometimes,i think that,thats what true holiness really is..."whole-ly-ness",suppose,only an enlightened being,can feel such beauty,even in our sense of imperfection...very nice,i'm still smiling at this moment of gracefulness...peace , jay

Sharon Ruebel November 2, 2010 at 10:12 AM Dear Caroline, This takes my breath away in all its beauty..... As Always, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire November 1, 2010 at 5:30 PM This is the type of love we all seek, Caroline, when "two" become "one" and know they will walk hand-inhand together. Such a wonderfully uplifting description of a couple who enjoy "the whole picture" together. Beautiful, Caroline! It's so nice to see you writing again and sharing your work with us. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown November 1, 2010 at 12:13 PM It was my pleasure to read your amazing writing today Caroline. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick November 1, 2010 at 4:04 AM Good work in this one..Two becoming one is very hard..It takes years of working at it..Sometimes on some differences we just have to agree to disagree...Enjoyed reading your work ..I am glad that you wrote about this topic and I am glad that I chose it to read this A.M..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Robert A. Dufresne October 31, 2010 at 7:38 PM Well done, insightful and romantic, Caroline

Dr.Ram Mehta October 31, 2010 at 5:33 PM Nice write well worded on The Whole piocture, Caroline

Anthony Beesley October 31, 2010 at 5:30 PM love it very much

Doris Culverhouse October 31, 2010 at 5:10 PM Enjoyed reading today!!

Iolanda Scripca October 31, 2010 at 4:41 PM "That when two see As one, the picture seen Is much wider" What a beautiful whole view from a beautiful and talented poetess - Caroline Cecile! That second half of your soul must be very lucky having you. Love, Iolanda