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The Whole Hollywood

walk me on a moonlit beach, give me your heart say the word I need to hear, make that our start smile when you see me give your hand to me always kiss me be all mine, be true, be a loving wife give yourself to me, don’t hold back, for life dream of me dream with me wake up with me. have my children, spend time with us, grow old with us don’t forget me, don’t forget my love, don’t forget us need me want me love me -26 April 2016-

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Date: 8/28/2016 11:48:00 AM
James, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest (sorry for the late comment) :)-luloo
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Date: 8/29/2016 8:11:00 AM
Thank you Laura for hosting us...:)
Date: 4/29/2016 7:25:00 AM
absolutely beautiful James so romantic - I read this like it is a proposal of marriage:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 5/5/2016 11:51:00 PM
but you are right...its the 3 phases in your life..the first was the proposal...second marriage...and the third well...growing old together
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Date: 4/29/2016 8:03:00 AM
thanks Jan.. for your kind words!

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