The Whole Hollywood

walk me on a moonlit beach, give me your heart
say the word I need to hear, make that our start
    smile when you see me 
    give your hand to me
    always kiss me

be all mine, be true, be a loving wife
give yourself to me, don’t hold back, for life
   dream of me
   dream with me
   wake up with me.

have my children, spend time with us, grow old with us
don’t forget me, don’t forget my love, don’t forget us
   need me
   want me
   love me

-26 April 2016-
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Scars Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 11:48 AM
James, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest (sorry for the late comment) :)-luloo
James Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 8:11 AM
Thank you Laura for hosting us...:)
Allison Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 7:25 AM
absolutely beautiful James so romantic - I read this like it is a proposal of marriage:-) hugs Jan xx7
James Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 11:51 PM
but you are right...its the 3 phases in your life..the first was the proposal...second marriage...and the third well...growing old together
James Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 8:03 AM
thanks Jan.. for your kind words!
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