The Whispering Voice

I broke down
I never smiled but I always frowned
I gave up my life and my soul
I felt the pain, I felt it all
I hated living
I never thought of forgiving
But now I changed
from the voice that whispered in my ear
with meaningful words that were clear
It changed me completely
It made the world easy to see
it's still hard to live but it's not like before
there are no broken smiles anymore
I'm just living and going on
I'm living this life as if I have won
I light the dark with a smile
I walk carefully every mile
I bend down on my knees
and I pray for God and I beg him "Please"

I look on the bright side
and i forget the rest
no matter what I do 
I always try to do the best
I know that God answers  every quest
and I always keep in mind 
that life is a small test.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Be the first to comment on this poem. Encourage this poet.

Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace