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The Wet Weather Coaxes Love

Rattling rain drops,heists our sleep at mid night Settling on tops,over the roofs from a width height Prattling quickly stops, whence I catch his sight Curling his mops of hair with my fingers a bit tight Battling cold, hops out when he hugs me in dim light Tackling him,slops sweat,continually in the twilight Troubling,he cops pleasure kissing me with might Bowling love crops stress,making us look bright.
6-7-2020 Note2:Triple Rhyme poetry Contest.(N/A) Placed as Honourable Mention in the contest. Note2: Strand Completely New (20), Any Form,Any Theme Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand.

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Date: 8/14/2020 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love the rain. We have had only one rain in a very long time. A loving write. Enjoy your win and day...........
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V. Deepa
Date: 8/14/2020 11:59:00 AM
Hello Paula mam, Thankyou for your kind support and appreciation.Glad you enjoyed it:-) Oh, here in India we are having rainy season now.I love rain too:-) Best wishes for you too. Have a lovely day.Take care:-)
Date: 7/6/2020 2:16:00 PM
Hello Deepa, I have just read your poem. So beautifully done. Also romantic. enjoy your day my friend. Much love , Darlene
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Date: 7/8/2020 2:40:00 PM
Hello Darlene mam, Wow so sweet of you.:-)Thankyou very much.I am always delighted to read your beautiful comments.:-) Have a wonderful day:-)Much love ~Deepa

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