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The Wet Progress

Like a fire placed before her,
Serving as a source of tommorow's shower
Sweat and wail can never be eluded,
As she proceed through the narrow
hotbed

Body disrupted, as unexpected scene erupted
A fearful lass on a hot coal
Experiencing the traumatic show
When the kite of life drove-by
Maintaining her integrity without
loosing her tie


As she lay her hand on the keg of sweat,
She begins to sail out of tommorows fret
Determination truly she adore,
Making her to see success harbour


Tartness like a movie she watch in rising
Then, let the sweet chowder appear in her dusk
With her eyes on her true goal
Strongly, she keeps herself under the broil

Her spirit turns bright,
As she keep off her voyage sprite
Beautiful night she see in true hope
Albeit she hack it in the labour rope

I never knew she could smile like a
valour,
When her appearance becomes sour 
A plucky girl with strong power to
steer,
On the negligence of the labour tear
Then, today she see herself in wail
Tommorow will bring gleesome ray.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/12/2016 7:40:00 AM
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Date: 11/17/2016 12:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ma. Actually, I love writing inspirational and romantic poems using my artistic writing talent, involving the use of my imagination potentiality. I'm so happy to have you as my friend, and I hope also that you will be my mentor, serving as my platform of improvement!
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Date: 11/17/2016 12:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ma. Actually, I love writing inspirational and romantic poems using my artistic writing talent, involving the use of my imagination potentiality. I'm so happy to have you as my friend, and I hope also that you will be my mentor, serving as my platform of improvement!

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