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The Weight On My Mind

From the shadows i have emerged Like an electric shock through your veins i've surged This will be the loudest thing you hear But don't worry you won't waste a tear Just as i was about to give up on everthing Just when i was down and out You come along with that song you sing Now i'm fine i have no doubt Knowing all along that someone or something was the solution But never knowing that it would come in the shape of you You have solved many things for me including my mental pollution It's in the way that you do that thing you do I could write this all down in some kind of long story Where the hero goes down in a sort of blazing glory But that isn'the story that i wish to write For i've been up thinking about this and that all night And then my mind focuses on what is most important Like a rocket it explodes and sends me warm shivers For the time being lets try to not be negligent Under the weight on my mind this building quivers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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