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The Weaver's Song

Oh celestial beings glittering in halo divine You've floated in universe on eternal timeline Years and ages so miniature for you to count A lover's measure of eternity now I recount The symphony dissolves curling magic in the air No grand charades, just a forlorn weaver's prayer He sings for his love, a foregone red-necked bird Though demented with age, memories never blurred His quivering voice over the valley sprinkles dew Fingers weaving yarn orchestrate fir trees in blue Blazing dusk in golden sequins drapes bare numb feet Flames of his faith warm his drenched tattered seat Smooth velvet symphony of soothing union in spring Hums in shivering breeze, white layers forbid to sing Entwined in azure embrace time comes to a standstill Apart, his heart dragged through unending days of chill Unbeknownst of numbers, age he weaves forever in recluse His melodious love drips through crevices of his muse Adorns pearly fir in Autumn with woven Cashmere shawl When Autumn ends, he unknits it again to a huge ball His incessant penance in separation enchants the twirling light Mountains drape themselves in love of gossamer veil so bright Together, time halts, his love is five feet of yarn he weaves Apart, time floats, his love grows four seasons old he believes June 9, 2020 Time Poetry Contest Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke ~Winner: First Place BRIAN'S SELECT A,any form,any theme Poetry Contest ~Winner: Second Place

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Date: 6/13/2020 3:24:00 AM
Beautiful expression:) ...loved it!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/13/2020 4:50:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Aditi :)
Date: 6/13/2020 3:14:00 AM
This is such an incredible piece of work! I am so happy to see it honored with your worthy First Place win! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/13/2020 4:49:00 AM
Blessed by your gracious appreciation Connie. Thank you for your wonderful wishes. God bless you. Much love :)
Date: 6/12/2020 11:50:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Aditi. I've enjoyed many of your works for their depth of feeling, especially recent ones. Best to you.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/12/2020 12:46:00 PM
It is a blessing and an honor that you like my words Eric. Thank you for stopping by and appreciating my efforts. God bless you :)
Date: 6/12/2020 11:35:00 AM
"The symphony dissolves curling magic in the air", Congrats on your win Aditi..
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/12/2020 12:46:00 PM
Thank you for your gracious words of appreciation Joseph. God bless you :)
Date: 6/12/2020 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations for your win. A beautiful write. I think you will love to read this poem. ( www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-weaver ) Enjoy your win and day..............
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/12/2020 2:04:00 PM
Thank you for sharing that poem Paula. I remember having read it once long back. It is a lovely composition of faith and hope in God's intentions. Love :)
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/12/2020 12:48:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and your kind words of appreciation Paula :) Glad you shared your words with me. Yes I am sure I will love to read the poem. Much love and blessings :)
Date: 6/12/2020 8:12:00 AM
CONGRATS on your first-place win with this amazing poem, Aditi! Janice
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/12/2020 8:33:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Janice :)
Date: 6/12/2020 4:45:00 AM
Great work with lovely words.:-) Heard the weaver's best song through your outstanding poem.Congratulations for your win. Take care.With love~Deepa.:-)
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/12/2020 7:22:00 AM
So glad you loved my muse Deepa. Thank you for your lovely appreciation. Much love :)
Date: 6/11/2020 6:40:00 PM
Back to wish you a well earned congratulations for your #1 win in the Time contest. Be blessed, my dear friend ~ John
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Date: 6/12/2020 12:27:00 AM
Blessed by your gracious words dear friend. Thank you for your wishes! God bless you :)
Date: 6/10/2020 4:54:00 PM
Aditi, you have been fruitful these past few days and I have fallen behind! I congratulate you for the win in Brian's contest for this magical and musical ode. So lovely, my friend!
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Date: 6/11/2020 6:05:00 AM
Thank you for your gracious words and wishes. I am sure you haven't fallen behind. Your pen can compose wonderful muse at any time, I am sure about that. Waiting to read beautiful words from you dear friend. God bless you :)

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