Aditi Mishra Poet Rhyme

The Weaver's Song

  Oh celestial beings glittering in halo divine
     You've floated in universe on eternal timeline
       Years and ages so miniature for you to count
    A lover's measure of eternity now I recount

  The symphony dissolves curling magic in the air
     No grand charades, just a forlorn weaver's prayer
       He sings for his love, a foregone red-necked bird
    Though demented with age, memories never blurred

  His quivering voice over the valley sprinkles dew
    Fingers weaving yarn orchestrate fir trees in blue
     Blazing dusk in golden sequins drapes bare numb feet
   Flames of his faith warm his drenched tattered seat

   Smooth velvet symphony of soothing union in spring
     Hums in shivering breeze, white layers forbid to sing
      Entwined in azure embrace time comes to a standstill
    Apart, his heart dragged through unending days of chill

   Unbeknownst of numbers, age he weaves forever in recluse
     His melodious love drips through crevices of his muse
       Adorns pearly fir in Autumn with woven Cashmere shawl 
    When Autumn ends, he unknits it again to a huge ball

   His incessant penance in separation enchants the twirling light 
      Mountains drape themselves in love of gossamer veil so bright
        Together, time halts, his love is five feet of yarn he weaves
      Apart, time floats, his love grows four seasons old he believes


June 9, 2020

Time Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke
~Winner: First Place

BRIAN'S SELECT A,any form,any theme Poetry Contest 
~Winner: Second Place

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Nisha Dhaka June 13, 2020 at 3:24 AM Beautiful expression:) ...loved it! Aditi Mishra June 13, 2020 at 4:50 AM Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Aditi :)

Connie Marcum Wong June 13, 2020 at 3:14 AM This is such an incredible piece of work! I am so happy to see it honored with your worthy First Place win! Blessings xxoo Aditi Mishra June 13, 2020 at 4:49 AM Blessed by your gracious appreciation Connie. Thank you for your wonderful wishes. God bless you. Much love :)

Eric Cohen June 12, 2020 at 11:50 AM Wonderful poem, Aditi. I've enjoyed many of your works for their depth of feeling, especially recent ones. Best to you. Aditi Mishra June 12, 2020 at 12:46 PM It is a blessing and an honor that you like my words Eric. Thank you for stopping by and appreciating my efforts. God bless you :)

Paula Goldsmith June 12, 2020 at 11:35 AM Congratulations for your win. A beautiful write. I think you will love to read this poem. ( www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-weaver ) Enjoy your win and day.............. Aditi Mishra June 12, 2020 at 2:04 PM Thank you for sharing that poem Paula. I remember having read it once long back. It is a lovely composition of faith and hope in God's intentions. Love :) Aditi Mishra June 12, 2020 at 12:48 PM Thank you for your visit and your kind words of appreciation Paula :) Glad you shared your words with me. Yes I am sure I will love to read the poem. Much love and blessings :)

Joseph May June 12, 2020 at 11:35 AM "The symphony dissolves curling magic in the air", Congrats on your win Aditi.. Aditi Mishra June 12, 2020 at 12:46 PM Thank you for your gracious words of appreciation Joseph. God bless you :)

Janice Canerdy June 12, 2020 at 8:12 AM CONGRATS on your first-place win with this amazing poem, Aditi! Janice Aditi Mishra June 12, 2020 at 8:33 AM Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Janice :)

V. Deepa June 12, 2020 at 4:45 AM Great work with lovely words.:-) Heard the weaver's best song through your outstanding poem.Congratulations for your win. Take care.With love~Deepa.:-) Aditi Mishra June 12, 2020 at 7:22 AM So glad you loved my muse Deepa. Thank you for your lovely appreciation. Much love :)

John Watt June 11, 2020 at 6:40 PM Back to wish you a well earned congratulations for your #1 win in the Time contest. Be blessed, my dear friend ~ John Aditi Mishra June 12, 2020 at 12:27 AM Blessed by your gracious words dear friend. Thank you for your wishes! God bless you :)

John Watt June 10, 2020 at 4:54 PM Aditi, you have been fruitful these past few days and I have fallen behind! I congratulate you for the win in Brian's contest for this magical and musical ode. So lovely, my friend! Aditi Mishra June 11, 2020 at 6:05 AM Thank you for your gracious words and wishes. I am sure you haven't fallen behind. Your pen can compose wonderful muse at any time, I am sure about that. Waiting to read beautiful words from you dear friend. God bless you :)