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The Way You Look At Me

Your presence takes my breathe away   



Date Written: 5/1/2021 


3 Place
"The Way You Look At Me" Contest 
Judged:5/3/2021 
Sponsored by:JCB Brul

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Sara Kendrick

September 7, 2025 at 3:07 AM

Ahh!! So romantic..Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

September 7, 2025 at 2:47 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found this write to be, So romantic. I enjoyed writing this Monoku. Have a blessed day......................

Line Gauthier

May 4, 2021 at 7:21 AM

Lovely, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith

May 4, 2021 at 8:12 AM

Thanks for your note. It was an honor to have a win. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day.....................

Alexis Y.

May 4, 2021 at 3:59 AM

Hi Paula, Being in the presence of the one you love is amazing. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Paula Goldsmith

May 4, 2021 at 8:10 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win in this contest. Glad you like this loving write. Have a blessed day.....................