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The Way You Look At Me

Your presence takes my breathe away Date Written: 5/1/2021 3 Place "The Way You Look At Me" Contest Judged:5/3/2021 Sponsored by:JCB Brul

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/4/2021 7:21:00 AM

Lovely, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/4/2021 8:12:00 AM

Thanks for your note. It was an honor to have a win. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day.....................

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/4/2021 3:59:00 AM

Hi Paula, Being in the presence of the one you love is amazing. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/4/2021 8:10:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win in this contest. Glad you like this loving write. Have a blessed day.....................

Terry Flood

Date: 5/4/2021 1:42:00 AM

Nice succinct sentiment Paula. Congrats. Terry

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/4/2021 8:08:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day.....................

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 5/2/2021 4:57:00 PM

Indeed a beautiful one

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/3/2021 8:20:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day writing away......................

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/1/2021 3:23:00 PM

sometimes one beautiful line is all you need. Wonderful !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/2/2021 8:01:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this fun write. Sometimes few words are better. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/1/2021 1:24:00 PM

I didn't know i was ever in your presence, Paula. Oh It's not to me, I'm sorry:) Who wouldn't like to have that whispered in their ear?

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/2/2021 7:59:00 AM

Thanks for your fun note. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day writing away......................

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/1/2021 11:16:00 AM

Love it. God bless you always. Love, Gina

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/1/2021 11:29:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day......................