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The Way You Look At Me

flicker of smile from her half- shut eyes, whirls persistent waves in my heart "The Way You Look At Me" Poetry Contest Monoku poetry form only. Sponsored by: JCB Brul Date: 01-05-2021. Placed : 1st

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/4/2021 7:36:00 AM

nice one, Patri ~

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 5/6/2021 8:47:00 AM

Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/4/2021 3:22:00 AM

Hi Patri, You said much in this romantic one-liner. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 5/6/2021 8:47:00 AM

very glad to receive the compliments. Thanks a lot.

Carol Mitra

Date: 5/3/2021 11:59:00 PM

Nicely done dear Patri....Congrats on your win :)

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 5/6/2021 8:46:00 AM

very glad to receive the compliments. Thanks a lot.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/3/2021 11:30:00 PM

Congratulations!

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 5/6/2021 8:46:00 AM

Thanks a lot for the compliments.