Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Monoku

The Way You Look At Me

flicker of smile from her half- shut eyes,
                                           whirls persistent waves in my heart




"The Way You Look At Me" Poetry Contest
Monoku poetry form only.
Sponsored by: JCB Brul
Date: 01-05-2021. 
Placed : 1st

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Line Gauthier May 4, 2021 at 7:36 AM nice one, Patri ~ Patri Venkata Ramana May 6, 2021 at 8:47 AM Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Alexis Y. May 4, 2021 at 3:22 AM Hi Patri, You said much in this romantic one-liner. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis Patri Venkata Ramana May 6, 2021 at 8:47 AM very glad to receive the compliments. Thanks a lot.

Carol Mitra May 3, 2021 at 11:59 PM Nicely done dear Patri....Congrats on your win :) Patri Venkata Ramana May 6, 2021 at 8:46 AM very glad to receive the compliments. Thanks a lot.

Christuraj Alex May 3, 2021 at 11:30 PM Congratulations! Patri Venkata Ramana May 6, 2021 at 8:46 AM Thanks a lot for the compliments.