The Way You Feel Against Me

the way you feel against me
when everything is right
your body so thick and soft
the scent of you so out of sight
my mind goes nowhere 
my thoughts are nicely naught
care is nonexistant when a natural
bliss is sought

the way you feel against me
when manhood really feels good
flowers bloom perfectly and all 
trees possess perfectly erect wood
coolness merges with heat during
this discreet restful retreat where 
there are new and interesting things
in which to sample, taste, and eat

the way you feel against me
i know now that i can cope
with all weights, levels, and 
balances of days consisting
of more nods than nope
please do not break this 
beautifully constructed bond
that we have made for we
broke our backs and necks to 
get here, and no longer should 
we be afraid....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Philibert Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 11:40 AM
well paced, well put together..
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August 20, 2014 at 2:08 PM
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