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The Way We Look

"All a man really wants, is a girl who looks good in a bikini." - Jack Freestone Grounded in gender A slave to testosterone Driven by primal feral instinct Dormant remains our soul Heart not yet love inked Now, a girl in a bikini Who is well proportioned Is no doubt pleasing to the eye Yet what’s seen is outer form Perishable and hence a lie Let us correct parallax Looking at spirit, not body God’s light shines within us all Mere dust is organic form Who we are, let’s recall The question, ‘who am I’ Compels us to look deeper If we be silent by day and night We be and so in time become God’s essence: living light

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Date: 8/30/2023 6:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your much deserved first place win!
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Date: 8/30/2023 7:31:00 AM
Thank you, Kim :)
Date: 8/29/2023 3:16:00 PM
Excellent penmanship and this winning poem has shone through my heart today Seeker, congrats on your first place win !
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Date: 8/29/2023 6:38:00 PM
Thank you, Mystic Rose
Date: 8/29/2023 2:41:00 AM
Congratulations!!! A meaningful write. Well deserved.
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Date: 8/29/2023 5:01:00 AM
Thank you, IE
Date: 8/29/2023 1:27:00 AM
Topping, so it's top! Well done!
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Julia Ward
Date: 8/29/2023 12:53:00 PM
I am pleased you liked your win... I hadn't specified how I would judge, leaving the approach up to contestants.
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Date: 8/29/2023 1:48:00 AM
Came as a surprise bcoz I thought you were looking for some light hearted mischievous poem ;)
Date: 8/29/2023 12:23:00 AM
So true. God bless you and Congrats., Love, Gina
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Date: 8/29/2023 1:26:00 AM
Thank you, Gina dear

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