The Way U Make Me Feel

Look into my eyes...
past your own reflection.
past the past you despise
insecurities aside...no exception.
open your eyes and realize 
we're far from perfection.
you say its all lies
i say its obsession
ignore my cries
blame it on depression
knock me down to size
then expect afection
tired of the demise
and can no longer take the rejection.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 4, 2009 at 1:23 PM
Very deep piece here. I love the line: "knock me down to size then expect affection." Brilliant write. ~Des Juan
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