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The Way To Peace and Tranquility

To kiss the thing we should
not kiss
Is to kiss the thing that brings
us bliss
To kiss the thing that we
would miss
Is to kiss the thing that we
would bless
To kiss the thing that we 
give our heart
Is to kiss the thing that would
tear it apart
To kiss the thing that we 
secretly love
Is to kiss the thing from
heaven above
Yet, to kiss the thing we 
should not kiss
Is to kiss the thing 
we love best

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Sara Kendrick Date: 6/26/2010 3:27:00 PM Great twister..Forbidden fruit taste better..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 1/29/2010 1:51:00 PM Deep here, Johniii. I read it several times. my thoughts are that to kiss the things from God above, spiritual things, is to kiss the thing that for us is best. If to kiss the thing we should not kiss brings more joy than kissing the gift from God....LOVE. Then watch out!!! There's a flaming sword at the Garden of Eden. We already have enough toil with thorns and thistles. If it's lust, let it go. If it's love, call the preacher and get on with the show! OKAY... I take it back. Great poem. Login to Reply

Kristy De La Keur Scoville Date: 1/29/2010 1:46:00 PM Interesting John...very interesting....makes one think before a kiss....very well done John...Much love The Southern Belle Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 1/29/2010 1:22:00 PM Yes the red apple in the Garden of Eden,you reminded me of it John. the thing we should not kiss, is to kiss the thing we love best, and i think in life we all kiss the thing we shouldnt kiss everynow and then cos we re human, so much truth in your poetry today, enjoyed it..Charma Login to Reply