Andrea Dietrich Poet Shape

The Way I'M Feeling These Days

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   NA in "One Word Wit Style" Poetry Contest

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Jack Horne November 23, 2018 at 3:11 PM LOL, great entry

Connie Marcum Wong November 13, 2018 at 2:04 PM Words are not needed for this piece Andrea. Great for the contest! : )

Harry Horsman November 12, 2018 at 4:18 PM Over the edge, clever stuff, Andrea, glad i've seen this...

Vladislav Raven November 10, 2018 at 1:36 PM Hi Andrea, A most creative write for the contest. I love the way you did this one. Excellent. Have a wonderful sunday. Hugs....Mike....Mike.

Agnes Krampe November 10, 2018 at 10:36 AM That's very clever. And I like the image of a tilted feeling - I think I know exactly what you mean

CayCay Godwin November 10, 2018 at 8:32 AM I couldn't wait to see what my click would reveal. Color us done! Love where your mind went, unique and "that's all I have to say about that form" (Forrest Gump pronunciation). We'll talk about this later! , and other things. Glad we both checked this one off without going cross-eyed. Love ... CayCay

Arthur Vaso November 10, 2018 at 12:01 AM I just hope tilted to happiness!!!!

Bette Bavington November 9, 2018 at 8:55 PM Hopefully you'll be right side up soon.

Caren Krutsinger November 9, 2018 at 6:49 PM So difficult but so terrific Andrea!

Rhona Mcferran November 9, 2018 at 6:27 PM I can sympathize! ;) Clever work, my friend!

Jan Allison November 9, 2018 at 5:45 PM I can understand why my friend! Hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit November 9, 2018 at 4:51 PM I felt tilted reading it..creative design and theme..best for a win, Andrea.

John Gondolf November 9, 2018 at 4:48 PM Very clever, Andrea, hope you return to level ground soon both emotionally and physically. Best of luck in the contest. John

Line Gauthier November 9, 2018 at 4:38 PM A fun poem, Andrea. Hope you feel better soon. LOL Andrea Dietrich November 10, 2018 at 5:43 PM If the Prolia ever wears off. I am pretty sure that horrid drug I was given produced the physical tilting.

Heidi Sands November 9, 2018 at 4:36 PM Oh wow! What a creation. I hope you feel less tilted soon! Try not to tip over :) Andrea Dietrich November 9, 2018 at 9:49 PM I keep hoping so too. Sometimes I lean over and tilt too far and spill things. I believe its side effects of a medication I took myself off of rcently, but I am waiting to see if it finally gets out of my system or maybe it's something I have no clue about!