Frederic Parker Poet Sijo

The Way Home Visual2

The quiet forest green meadow stretches to the horizon.
While heavy laden wagons have vanished in the darkening gray.
Their deep cut trail gives my eyes a silent path to reach home. 


contest Glorious Sijo Fields 

visual 2

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Skat A February 15, 2015 at 10:47 PM Frederic, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 11, 2015 at 1:35 AM Beautiful !!! Unique take with such an exquisite write Frederic! Congrats on big win!

Sara Kendrick February 9, 2015 at 3:07 PM Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Jan Allison February 8, 2015 at 2:24 PM Such a beautiful visual write Frederic many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux February 8, 2015 at 8:46 AM The last line ends this beauty well. Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich February 8, 2015 at 1:01 AM I really loved that final line: "gives me eyes a silent path to reach home" Amazing!!! Congrats in my contest.

Paul Callus February 6, 2015 at 6:12 PM This is a delightful and serene sijo, Frederic; and it goes so well with the visual. Love the end line! #7 // paul Paul Callus February 8, 2015 at 7:31 AM ...glad to be back with congratulations, Frederic! ...very merited. // paul

Nette Onclaud January 31, 2015 at 8:19 AM ohh, full of grace, so soft and gentle, frederick... i'm there passing too by the end...another beautiful work!.. huggs

Poesy Relish January 30, 2015 at 10:52 PM love your take on the topic.. i chose visual 2 as well,so its interesting to see how many different interpretations can be made of a single picture... best wishes,nad! #7

Carrie Richards January 30, 2015 at 10:45 AM I love it that you were able to tell a little story in just three lines! Perfectly done!

Laura Leiser January 29, 2015 at 8:36 PM Nicely done with great imagery!