The Waves

the waves surged forth~ it's calming effect.... cleansed me....

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 9/4/2008 6:32:00 PM

A day at the beach!! Yeah!!! Vince

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 9/3/2008 3:01:00 PM

This is an excellent haiku. Water is always a symbol of purification. Great job! ~Joseph

P Sheart

Date: 9/2/2008 12:12:00 PM

Hi Deneen Here's to the cleansing! A beautiful thought from a beautiful heart. Truly enjoyed. I think you'll like my latest lyrics. Take care sweet. Love Light Truth Patricia

Derrick Burton

Date: 9/1/2008 9:27:00 PM

deep, yet so short, enjoyed it. looking forward to more.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/1/2008 7:03:00 PM

The waves seem to have a calming effect on all of us. Peaceful, serene ahhh. God Bless Phyl

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/1/2008 5:35:00 PM

This poem has such a serene feeling, one can close their eyes and smell the ocean breeze! Nicely done!...Carrie