The Waves

the waves surged forth~
 
    it's calming effect....

   cleansed me....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
September 4, 2008 at 6:32 PM
A day at the beach!! Yeah!!! Vince
Spence Sr Avatar
September 3, 2008 at 3:01 PM
This is an excellent haiku. Water is always a symbol of purification. Great job! ~Joseph
Sheart Avatar
September 2, 2008 at 12:12 PM
Hi Deneen Here's to the cleansing! A beautiful thought from a beautiful heart. Truly enjoyed. I think you'll like my latest lyrics. Take care sweet. Love Light Truth Patricia
Burton Avatar
September 1, 2008 at 9:27 PM
deep, yet so short, enjoyed it. looking forward to more.
Babcock Avatar
September 1, 2008 at 7:03 PM
The waves seem to have a calming effect on all of us. Peaceful, serene ahhh. God Bless Phyl
Richards Avatar
September 1, 2008 at 5:35 PM
This poem has such a serene feeling, one can close their eyes and smell the ocean breeze! Nicely done!...Carrie
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