The Wave

the wave lands --
I wonder if she watched it
leave her shore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Burch Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 9:21 PM
oh. This one grabbed me...how gifted you are...love it....big huggsss,love deb
Chircop Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 3:32 AM
Suxh a beautiful haiku Charles-thanks for sharing-C.C
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February 6, 2012 at 10:48 AM
Good haiku Charles,like it. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
Williams Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 4:21 AM
Charles I see it, I understand it, I love it..David
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