Highwave Brian Poet Triolet

The Waterman - Visual 1

Oh streaking man on epic sea;

bold waterman stoked up on fear,

your blue room wall calm lunacy,

oh streaking man on epic sea.

In magic, bound up ecstasy,

your arching nemisis comes near,

oh streaking man on epic sea;

bold waterman stoked up on fear. 

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Olive Lane March 14, 2018 at 11:58 AM Nicely written triolet.

Kim Merryman June 13, 2015 at 8:55 PM A great interpretation of the visual. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Skat A June 13, 2015 at 6:27 PM HIGHWAVE, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)

Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 5:39 AM simply stunning triolet - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx Highwave Brian June 13, 2015 at 3:54 PM Im so sorry I meant to put !! Not ?? Highwave Brian June 13, 2015 at 6:00 AM Thank you ma'am??

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2015 at 12:56 AM Oh MAN, I almost put this second place and then I noticed your word Nemis. The word should be nemesis. It can be so easily fixed by just putting in that word and taking out the word "so." I just ADORE this poem!! Congrats in my contest. Highwave Brian June 13, 2015 at 5:55 AM Oh, and I didnt realize this mistake until reading your comment! Oh well. Thankyou for your kind comments.

Kp Nunez May 29, 2015 at 7:42 PM Wow! Written in the waterman's perspective! Nothing can be more personal with the feeling! You've done great, Brian. 7 from me . Kim Highwave Brian June 13, 2015 at 6:00 AM Yes, the error in the word was just pointed out :-( Im bummed. Thankyou for sharing your dilemma. Ive often hoped to find myself in the "blueroom" but havent just yet! Highwave Brian May 29, 2015 at 8:07 PM Thankyou ma'am :-)