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The Waterlily Pond

Weeping willows betray the water Blending too deeply, too green You say lily, add water before Methinks you painted a dream Dare you dream In a world of green When white stark posts refuse to gleam? Dare a foot trod upon the arch So blissfully green as the shrubs (Or should I say trees), and these Cat tails that the wind rubs Much softer though, than the trees

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/18/2013 6:33:00 PM
I love this flow
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Date: 5/30/2013 7:35:00 PM
This is a lovely and lively poem. Love the vivid imagery and the contrast throughout..each stanza different and works so well together. great creativity
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Date: 5/16/2013 11:42:00 AM
- If we take time, there is so much beauty in nature ..... use all your senses, see, feel and listen. - Thank you for visiting my poem Juli-Michelle. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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