Kim Rodrigues Poet Haiku

The Waterhole

THE WATERHOLE

Two elephants merge
at the waterhole ~
entanglement of trunks

one emerges as
the gray-fountain leader ~
heavyweight of the dusty road

two images wane
in monotone gloaming ~
wispy clouds of dust

8/27/2017

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Andrea Dietrich August 29, 2017 at 5:32 PM Very nice. That last one I especially enjoyed for the imagery you used. Kim Rodrigues August 29, 2017 at 7:42 PM Thanks, Andrea!

Arthur Vaso August 28, 2017 at 8:58 PM A beautiful Haiku, I could picture this in my mind. Kim Rodrigues August 28, 2017 at 9:03 PM Thanks, Arthur :)

Dean Wood August 28, 2017 at 8:43 PM You paint a great picture Kim. Kim Rodrigues August 28, 2017 at 8:51 PM Thanks, Dean. From a scene I witnessed on live Africam.

Vijay Pandit August 28, 2017 at 8:38 PM Good imagery! Kim Rodrigues August 28, 2017 at 8:51 PM Thanks, Vijay! :)