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The Waterhole

THE WATERHOLE Two elephants merge at the waterhole ~ entanglement of trunks one emerges as the gray-fountain leader ~ heavyweight of the dusty road two images wane in monotone gloaming ~ wispy clouds of dust 8/27/2017

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2017 5:32:00 PM

Very nice. That last one I especially enjoyed for the imagery you used.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2017 7:42:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/28/2017 8:58:00 PM

A beautiful Haiku, I could picture this in my mind.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2017 9:03:00 PM

Thanks, Arthur :)

Dean Wood

Date: 8/28/2017 8:43:00 PM

You paint a great picture Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2017 8:51:00 PM

Thanks, Dean. From a scene I witnessed on live Africam.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/28/2017 8:38:00 PM

Good imagery!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2017 8:51:00 PM

Thanks, Vijay! :)