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The Water Listens

Asleep at night, tucked into dreams Waves retreat, the water beats Soft awake, whispered words The water's there, waves silent prayer A wintry morn, the sun's rays bright Waves glisten, the water listens Late afternoon, a chill return Waters merge, whitecaps surge Moonlit eve, hearts on sleeves Waves subside, the waters glide

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/21/2019 8:45:00 AM
Beautifully soothing my friend. A very alluring poem with soft features. Nicely done.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/21/2019 4:48:00 PM
I feel privileged to receive such a complimentary comment. Thanks, Chris! Cheers, Gershon
Date: 11/21/2019 8:18:00 AM
Good one...all I could think of was Lake Michigan.)))) Panagiota
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/21/2019 4:46:00 PM
Great minds think alike: I was thinking about Lake Michigan too! Smiles, Gershon
Date: 11/20/2019 11:52:00 PM
Very nice Gershon. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 11/20/2019 9:51:00 PM
I'll be brief ~ A FAVE.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/21/2019 4:44:00 PM
Briefer: TY!!!
Date: 11/20/2019 9:41:00 PM
Magical! This poem has vividly beautiful imagery, and a stirring theme, Gershon. :) Evelyn
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/21/2019 4:44:00 PM
Your comment is so inspiring, Evelyn, I may have to write a poem about it!! ~ Gershon's Muse
Date: 11/20/2019 9:40:00 PM
Something bout those wintry waves, huh. Great couplets Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/21/2019 4:42:00 PM
Charlie, thanks for your support and comment! Cheers, Gershon

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