The Wall

Nowhere, no warm shawl
Muscle power raising wall
The oleanders fall
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29/02/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Herlihy Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 6:21 AM
Whether on a literal or symbolic level, this senryu packs a punch and works well. JH
Gupta Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 11:11 AM
Thank you ...
Roper Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 11:13 AM
Very good, Probir, a lot of power in your words.
Gupta Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 1:04 AM
Ha ha ha, a lean and thin man with power ! ... Thank you ...
Andresen Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 8:24 AM
- I have no words to comments, Probir ... I feel this as a nightmare ... every day new "ideas" ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 8:58 AM
Right ... My immediate reaction on reading the headlines this morning ... Thank you ...
Trifiatis Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 2:59 AM
True my friend, Probir. Superb Haiku. A seven.
Gupta Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 8:59 AM
Thank you ...
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