The Wall

Nowhere, no warm shawl Muscle power raising wall The oleanders fall _____________________________ 29/02/2017

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Date: 2/1/2017 6:21:00 AM

Whether on a literal or symbolic level, this senryu packs a punch and works well. JH

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/1/2017 11:11:00 AM

Thank you ...

Date: 1/29/2017 11:13:00 AM

Very good, Probir, a lot of power in your words.

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/30/2017 1:04:00 AM

Ha ha ha, a lean and thin man with power ! ... Thank you ...

Date: 1/29/2017 8:24:00 AM

- I have no words to comments, Probir ... I feel this as a nightmare ... every day new "ideas" ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/29/2017 8:58:00 AM

Right ... My immediate reaction on reading the headlines this morning ... Thank you ...

Date: 1/29/2017 2:59:00 AM

True my friend, Probir. Superb Haiku. A seven.

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/29/2017 8:59:00 AM

Thank you ...