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The Wall

They looked destitute, desperate and worn-out from the inside. Their spirit and pride was deflated from within. On the other end they saw their dreams chained and buried in tombs, by people who claimed were liberating them from darkness; without their spirit, they were in the dark. A wall was separating them from their presumed liberators; the wall was invisible and high. The wall was in their thoughts...

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Date: 10/21/2016 5:36:00 AM
Very well written about the ingrained wall ... GL ...
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/21/2016 6:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Probir, for enjoying my verse!! ;-)

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