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The Walk We Take

Genteel hearts, unscathed by ways of hate
May surely walk through heavens gates

Copyright © Adell Foster | Year Posted 2009

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February 14, 2010 at 2:04 PM

Hope to walk through those gates some day. Good use of contrast in the two lines to convey your message. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen

October 20, 2009 at 11:39 PM

Lovely crystalle Adell one for my favourites.Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome comments today

October 7, 2009 at 4:57 PM

so very lovely!..smooth.......right! Light & Love

October 1, 2009 at 8:28 AM

Beautiful understand in this wonderful Crystalline. So shall Genteel hearts, void of hate, enter the gates. Sincerely Moses

August 24, 2009 at 2:44 PM

Let us hope that eventually loses out to love. Keep 'em coming Yours Matthew Anish

August 21, 2009 at 2:39 PM

Great feeling here, Adell! And thanks for your comments. Gert

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 20, 2009 at 5:59 AM

Adell, excellent writing. And I do believe you are correct in your feeling in this one. Love, Carol

Christopher Higgins

August 20, 2009 at 4:18 AM

The way we live our life on earth gives us a shot at the pearly gates.

August 20, 2009 at 3:51 AM

Love it. On earth and heaven also. Keep writing. Sara

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