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The Walk We Take

Genteel hearts, unscathed by ways of hate May surely walk through heavens gates

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 2/14/2010 2:04:00 PM
Hope to walk through those gates some day. Good use of contrast in the two lines to convey your message. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen
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Date: 10/20/2009 11:39:00 PM
Lovely crystalle Adell one for my favourites.Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome comments today
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Date: 10/7/2009 4:57:00 PM
so very lovely!..smooth.......right! Light & Love
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Date: 10/1/2009 8:28:00 AM
Beautiful understand in this wonderful Crystalline. So shall Genteel hearts, void of hate, enter the gates. Sincerely Moses
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Date: 8/24/2009 2:44:00 PM
Let us hope that eventually loses out to love. Keep 'em coming Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/21/2009 2:39:00 PM
Great feeling here, Adell! And thanks for your comments. Gert
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Date: 8/20/2009 5:59:00 AM
Adell, excellent writing. And I do believe you are correct in your feeling in this one. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/20/2009 4:18:00 AM
The way we live our life on earth gives us a shot at the pearly gates.
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Date: 8/20/2009 3:51:00 AM
Love it. On earth and heaven also. Keep writing. Sara
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