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The Waking State

The waking state, our weakest link If governed by instinct Oh hermit, each act with love ink Make ego urge extinct Be alert, not in trance Distil thoughts, take no chance To rhythm divine dance We choose our fate The waking state 18-December-2021 Quietus
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Rodrigues Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 6:11 AM
Be alert, not in trance Distil thoughts…Yes!
Seeker Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 7:59 AM
:)
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