The Waiting 2009

The house is warm, 
But I feel so cold.
Without your love,
I grow so old.

Without your smile,
A focussed light.
I feel I may, 
I feel I might,

Begin to fade,
And slowly die.
Without your side,
Right by my side.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Jenkins Avatar
November 15, 2009 at 1:42 PM
thanks guys! My boyfriend is doing national service for a year-here in greece its compulsory!
Kapoor Avatar
November 15, 2009 at 10:09 AM
Short and Sad Waiting. Put Hopes as we can not live without hopes. Best wishes, Kapoor
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2009 at 4:26 AM
I enjoyed reading thank you. Love, Carol
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