The Wait

My door I left open all night My moistened eyes kept smiling all night ___________________________________________ 15/11/2016
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Beaufort Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 12:58 PM
This leaves a lot of room for interpretation. Were you crying from sadness or joy? Was it raining and you were soaking in the humidity? It's thought provoking and a treat for me. This site is a source of joy when I see how some wonderful human beings have a way with words.
Gupta Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 7:50 PM
Thank you ... Indeed I left the poem open ...
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November 16, 2016 at 9:37 AM
Had to research Crystalline poetry, nicely inked, I'm so impatient, I'd cry too. :)
Gupta Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 4:30 AM
Ha ha, ... thank you ...
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 2:24 AM
Such is love Probir. There is no time limit when waiting for love. A great little gem! 7 ; )
Gupta Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 5:24 AM
Aww, greetings from unexpected flower ... a gem of my hour ... thank you so much Connie ...
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