The Wait

Sitting in these uniform white 
halls…
Waiting for that dreaded 
bacterial call...
Each time just another Everest 
height fall…
Running out of time, just trying 
to cling to our pain,
Every filthy prolonging lie like a 
sterile acid rain,
Praying that before your clock 
chimes, God unlocks your 
chains
Every tornado twist of my heart 
like a tsunami’s initial rain of 
relief,
Just giving way to one more 
catastrophic hurricane of my 
grief
The times my heart doesn’t 
shatter with selfish love are 
brief,
Nurse’s news ravaging our 
souls, trying to turn you to the 
church, 
Before you expire into infection, 
through purgatory gates you 
lurch
A way to get that closure, to 
have found sanity in my love to 
end my search,
Just the thought, to my 
tattered heart like a mercury 
stake,
Snatching you from demon’s 
and angel’s arms, I insist it’s all 
a mistake,
But I know inside, their current 
plan for us is just to harshly 
take…

**Dedicated to Paul Hellewell**
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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August 2, 2012 at 12:36 AM
alex... Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's waiting contest... what a WAIT..lol ;-) ~xox PD
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 2:05 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Wait" contest Alex. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 7:54 AM
congrats on your superb win,alex.. :) huggs!
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July 31, 2012 at 1:42 AM
Congratulations on your win Alex xx
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July 31, 2012 at 12:40 AM
Congrats on your big win Alex...well done!!!
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July 30, 2012 at 6:46 PM
So powerfully emotional, Alex! Congrats on your wonderful win with this superb dedication! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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July 30, 2012 at 3:01 PM
Well done! Congratulations on your win. As ALways, Shar
W. Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 3:13 PM
Thank you so much!
Williams Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 2:51 PM
Alex congrats on your win, great dedication, I like..David
W. Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 3:13 PM
Thank you
W. Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 2:15 PM
Thank y'all so much for the congratulations!
Britt Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 2:08 PM
Congrats on your featured poem, Alex!! <3
Brown Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 6:52 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Alex. Love, Carol
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