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The waggle of bubbly fizz

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16 August 2025, Our Effervescence Poetry Contest- Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker
Line of inquiry: "conjoined with the whole we play our life role exuding a scent by gra onnting love consent"

fizz

[ hear the song ]

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dawn-born bubbles rise
lifting in glass to the sky
an exultant choir—
ringing a sacred mantra
to summon the faithful throng

the soft incense clings,
invisible yet binding,
threading through the mist—
binding spirits together
all sharing a common breath

wind shakes the blossoms
perfume drifts out as a lure
for lone foragers—
coming back with a new dance
a waggle step hymn pathway

one for one and all
though small they rise together
heart tuned to one pulse—
a common proud heritage
ancient unbroken alive

when threats bang the gate
when summer's furnace bears down
wings thunder like drums—
rallying to guard the home
defending their holy ground

let us circle close
songs and breath woven in thread
of effervescence
gracious in our common cause—
fizzing in chalice of light

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