The Voyage of Life

Journey  through  the world, 
     Is of two, golden  doors!
          Walk ing    through, 
            Is slim, too short!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Scholtz Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 4:02 PM
Enjoyed your good work Adelaja. Elizabeth
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2011 at 5:14 PM
Yes, it is much too short, Adelaja. Congrats on your win in the contest!
Brown Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 5:56 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in ^Rick's "5~8 Line Poetry" contest Adelaja. Love, Carol
Wesley Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 12:09 PM
I agree that it is a struggle but as long as it is open we hope to find the way. Nice thought my friend. :)
Olayiwola Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 12:31 PM
well appreciated, look forward to be like you.
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