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The Voyage of Life

Journey through the world, Is of two, golden doors! Walk ing through, Is slim, too short!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/24/2012 4:02:00 PM
Enjoyed your good work Adelaja. Elizabeth
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Date: 12/20/2011 5:14:00 PM
Yes, it is much too short, Adelaja. Congrats on your win in the contest!
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Date: 12/19/2011 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in ^Rick's "5~8 Line Poetry" contest Adelaja. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/13/2011 12:09:00 PM
I agree that it is a struggle but as long as it is open we hope to find the way. Nice thought my friend. :)
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Adelaja Olayiwola
Date: 12/13/2011 12:31:00 PM
well appreciated, look forward to be like you.

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