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"THE VOWS" FROM MY ROOF TOP GARDEN, 29 JULY 2017, MY PHOTO,©

The Vows

Sacred vows they made

Forever their love to last,

Eternally One!







© Demetrios Trifiatis
         29 July 2017

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Probir Gupta

July 30, 2017 at 9:44 AM

A joy to read indeed ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 30, 2017 at 5:50 PM

Thank you my dear friend, Probir! Indeed!

Alexis Y.

July 29, 2017 at 2:37 PM

Hi Demetrios, What a beautiful testament of love in a few words. Well done:-) Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 29, 2017 at 2:49 PM

Does love need many words to be declared, my dear, Alexis? So good to see you again my friend! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 29, 2017 at 8:13 AM

- GORGEOUS !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 29, 2017 at 2:09 PM

THANK YOU, my friend, Anne-Lise for liking my little poem! Hugs!

Maria Williams

July 29, 2017 at 7:57 AM

Unfortunately many young people dont take their vows seriously at all these days. My father used to say, "in our day when something was broken we fixed it, we did not throw it away". Sacred vows should be taken seriously. Loved your Haiku, brilliant as always dearest Demetrios...Maria

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 29, 2017 at 2:12 PM

Your father dearest, Maria was right and is right! Today's mentality is when something it doesn't work throw it away and buy a new one. Unfortunately this mentality expanded to relationships and marriages! Thank you for your wonderful and didactic comment my dear friend! Keep mr. R, please! Haha!

Russell Sivey

July 29, 2017 at 4:04 AM

Wow, such a powerful message you have written here Demetrios! I love it! You have employed upon me a grand feeling of what love's dedication truly means, what my Vows were to me! I truly loved reading this grandiose piece this morning! Such an awesome poem, Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 29, 2017 at 5:19 AM

How wonderful to receive your visit yet for another day dear Russell and read your gracious comments, pieces of poetic ardor! Thank you my friend!

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