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The Vow

I am life but i am death I am truth but i am myth I am seen but i am invisible I am beaten but i am invincible I am drenched but i am dry I gave up but i did try I lose and i win I burn but i have flawless skin I fell when i rose up high I reached out below the sky I am you and i am i You are me i wonder why Under the blankets my realm benights But inside my chest my heart ignites I drown but i don't sink I come up with froth near the brink Unleash my wrath on the sand Slither in pain crushed under your hand I cry but you can't hear Crying with anguish I can't bear We were two now we are one You are gone once you are done I still lay i fathom how It was your job But it was my vow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/17/2016 12:29:00 AM
What an amazing Poem You my friend def have a way with words Great Job Keep up the good work Look forward to seeing much more from you...Jen
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Sohini Mukherjee
Date: 4/17/2016 4:45:00 AM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 4/11/2016 1:49:00 PM
Splendid piece Sohini, so full of contrasts with nice flow and rhyme. Nice one!
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Sohini Mukherjee
Date: 4/17/2016 4:45:00 AM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 7/26/2015 10:22:00 PM
Sohini, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/25/2015 10:49:00 PM
Sohini, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/25/2015 3:28:00 PM
Hi Sohini Welcome to poetry soup. I loved your poem. You will find poetry soup an excellent place to develop as a poet. Try entering the member contests. Welcome Regards, Sizwe
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