The Virgo In Me

The Virgo In Me
A virgin goddess,  pure simple mind
A fervour in heart, kindness for mankind
Always yearning for eternal youth
In search of undying truth
High aims of touching the sun
Enjoys the company of the young
A craving for perfection as close as it can be
That’s the Virgo in me
Little actions and deeds observed
But very easily perturbed
Even if a dear one steps out of bounds
I’m ever ready with my sharp bullet rounds
People adore me for my abilities
Oh my it is the Virgo in me
I’m famous for my devotion
My heart an ocean of emotions
 Its love that makes me passionate
Trying to immerse my loved ones in it
I’m often quite forward and bold
But nerves quiver turning me cold
No chains bind me, a spirit free
Oh yes it is the Virgo in me

18/06/2011
By-Tahera Mannan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/24/2013 7:31:00 PM
Tahera, congratulations with your poem on Andrea's, favorite list. always~ Linda
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Date: 4/23/2013 11:27:00 AM
What a sweet and bold portrait you have sketched with the sweet colors of perfection, emotion and love. Beautiful writes my friend and thank you for your kind comments on my Poem. The credit goes to Andrea for remembering my name although I am not very regular nowadays. With best wishes...Ravindra..TM
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Date: 4/19/2013 9:01:00 PM
I just loved this one since I am a virgo too.Sure would be nice to see it in my current Faves contest. If you act fast. All the entries are winners.
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Date: 7/10/2011 8:04:00 AM
Tahera, a great job, very pleased to see an honorable win for you in Nette's contest. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/10/2011 7:30:00 AM
Congrats Tahera on your fantastic win in Nette's zodiac zones ..with this brilliant beauty and dynamic delight.. one of my sons is a Virgo too..luv.. good people..
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Date: 7/10/2011 6:47:00 AM
Congratulations from a fellow virgo. Mike
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Date: 7/10/2011 5:09:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of nette, Tahera
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Date: 6/25/2011 11:33:00 AM
A wonderful entry, I enjoyed and good luch.
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Date: 6/19/2011 5:06:00 PM
Good luck in Nette's Zodiac contest...Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work about Emergency Room..Cody called me and left a message this afternoon..He was sent to a crisis center close to home so I will go check on him tomorrow..Thanks for your concern..Sara
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Date: 6/19/2011 8:33:00 AM
Nice to know a virgo, Tahera
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Date: 6/18/2011 9:54:00 PM
wow, tahera. YOu just described ME. I too am a Virgo!! I love this. Gotta fave it. When is your day?
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