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The Vault of Heavens

THE VAULT OF HEAVENS Under The vault of the glorious heavens I stood, Admiring creation’s incomparable Grandeur, Insignificant, in truth, I felt in Comparison Till Reason’s, I opened the Door! © Demetrios Trifiatis 20 June 2013 *Without his reasoning, his logos, his understanding, Man would be crushed Under the weight of Cosmos!

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Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/21/2013 11:47:00 PM

Excellent. Thought provoking write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/22/2013 12:11:00 AM

Thank you, Ravi, for appreciating it!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/20/2013 3:53:00 PM

Demetrios this is lovely was wondering where you were nice to see you back Shadow x smiles

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/20/2013 11:51:00 PM

Thank you Shadow!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/20/2013 3:32:00 PM

Whether by day or whether by night it is an awesome sight..Enjoyed reading your excellent work today..Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/20/2013 11:50:00 PM

Thank you Sara!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/20/2013 3:10:00 PM

You light my day with this soulful piece, D.. love the ending... stirring; well done!..:) huggs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/20/2013 3:30:00 PM

Thank you, Nette, for your warm comment!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 6/20/2013 2:08:00 PM

As always a beautiful piece of poetry. Thank you so much...... Lucilla

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/20/2013 2:41:00 PM

thank you, Lucilla for your kind comment!

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 6/20/2013 12:36:00 PM

Excellent poem. Thought provoking work.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/20/2013 1:38:00 PM

Thank you Seosamh for recognizing what the point was!

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/20/2013 11:17:00 AM

Wow, now this is a tremendous and powerful write my friend! You have written an amazing poem! I truly loved reading this outstanding piece this afternoon! What a fantastic poem, Great work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/20/2013 1:37:00 PM

My friend Russell, how nice for you to visit! It means a lot, especially for this kind of poetry!

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/20/2013 10:17:00 AM

you give so many reasons here, reasons for one to muse in a visual aspect, upon your superb imagery...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/20/2013 1:36:00 PM

Thank you Harry for being the first to comment! I appreciate it!