Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Epigram

The Vault of Heavens

THE VAULT OF HEAVENS


Under 
The vault of the glorious heavens
I stood,
Admiring creation’s incomparable 
Grandeur, 
Insignificant, in truth, I felt in
Comparison
Till Reason’s, I opened the
Door!


© Demetrios Trifiatis
     20 June 2013

*Without his reasoning, his logos, his understanding, Man would be crushed
Under the weight of Cosmos!

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Ravi Sathasivam June 21, 2013 at 11:47 PM Excellent. Thought provoking write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs. Demetrios Trifiatis June 22, 2013 at 12:11 AM Thank you, Ravi, for appreciating it!

Shadow Hamilton June 20, 2013 at 3:53 PM Demetrios this is lovely was wondering where you were nice to see you back Shadow x smiles Demetrios Trifiatis June 20, 2013 at 11:51 PM Thank you Shadow!

Sara Kendrick June 20, 2013 at 3:32 PM Whether by day or whether by night it is an awesome sight..Enjoyed reading your excellent work today..Sara Demetrios Trifiatis June 20, 2013 at 11:50 PM Thank you Sara!

Nette Onclaud June 20, 2013 at 3:10 PM You light my day with this soulful piece, D.. love the ending... stirring; well done!..:) huggs Demetrios Trifiatis June 20, 2013 at 3:30 PM Thank you, Nette, for your warm comment!

Lucilla Carrillo June 20, 2013 at 2:08 PM As always a beautiful piece of poetry. Thank you so much...... Lucilla Demetrios Trifiatis June 20, 2013 at 2:41 PM thank you, Lucilla for your kind comment!

Seosamh De Burca June 20, 2013 at 12:36 PM Excellent poem. Thought provoking work. Demetrios Trifiatis June 20, 2013 at 1:38 PM Thank you Seosamh for recognizing what the point was!

Russell Sivey June 20, 2013 at 11:17 AM Wow, now this is a tremendous and powerful write my friend! You have written an amazing poem! I truly loved reading this outstanding piece this afternoon! What a fantastic poem, Great work!! Demetrios Trifiatis June 20, 2013 at 1:37 PM My friend Russell, how nice for you to visit! It means a lot, especially for this kind of poetry!

Harry Horsman June 20, 2013 at 10:17 AM you give so many reasons here, reasons for one to muse in a visual aspect, upon your superb imagery... Demetrios Trifiatis June 20, 2013 at 1:36 PM Thank you Harry for being the first to comment! I appreciate it!