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The vaporised self

To be just like him, smiling as he fell, we set out to make void-centric soul’s stance, assured that with God within, all is well, so melding head with heart, we took a chance, to turn toward love, our platonic glance. With mind unfrozen, once heart was open, magnetism manifested as chosen, suffused with bliss heat, our vibrance upbeat, we savoured soma nectar ambrosian, our soul’s presence surrendered at God’s feet.

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Date: 4/6/2025 11:37:00 AM
Wonderful imagery used in this one. I sure enjoyed the read
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Date: 4/6/2025 7:56:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea dear, God bless
Date: 4/6/2025 10:30:00 AM
I love this one. And I, also understand coherence, and am also right there at God's feet. Love and hugs, Catie
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Date: 4/6/2025 10:31:00 AM
So delighted you empathise and identify with the message, Catie

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