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practice makes perfect, so let’s get to it until we feel each nuance deep within soft rhythm taking us to the summit the table is laid and the lamp is lit inviting us to silence ego din practice makes perfect, so let’s get to it playful forgiving heart and ready wit childlike pristine innocence free from sin soft rhythm taking us to the summit divinity within clear light emits cognised by presence in stillness sanguine practice makes perfect, so let’s get to it steely stoic resolve that never quits each breath intake with gratitude virgin soft rhythm taking us to the summit embrace-hold-release with ease, oh hermit feeling thus bliss graze each pore of our skin practice makes perfect, so let’s get to it soft rhythm taking us to the summit 16-April-2021

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Date: 4/26/2021 11:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Seeker. As always, wonderful word usage and creative phrases. Didn't expect that ending but it was quite delightful! All the best. Blessings to you!
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Date: 4/26/2021 11:06:00 PM
Thank you, Sam! The ending? Vibrant in detachment, flowing thus in contentment, as the divine bliss elixir, teleports us to heightened rapture!

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