The Vacancy

The solidarity of a dark sky Absence of the torrid light Coldness into the eyes Russell Sivey

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Harry Horsman

Date: 2/28/2012 10:48:00 AM

love this form, and your poem fit into it very well, like this. harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2012 9:02:00 PM

This is kind of chilling, which means ME LIKES.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/27/2012 8:20:00 PM

amazing view of sky without sunlight Russell.. u are so terrific at these short poems whicdh are so emphatic the statements in a few lines.. luv.. enjoyed ..

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/27/2012 7:47:00 PM

does ring true of this day....what part of the country are you in? I am in Ga!! did finally see some light at the end of the day.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/27/2012 1:33:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this creative work..The solid gray today dampened my spirts..Thanks for the kind review of my work..I felt that I had painted myself into a corner with the few words that I could think of that rhyme with tiny in the Tyburn that I had written..Sara