The Ups and Downs

The ups and downs of life
Somehow seem to be condensed 
When a family weekend has,
After too much time, commenced.

For excitement, filled with smiles,
Leads to tantrums and to tears,
Though some ice cream stops sure help
Tilt the balance (as do beers).

Just when things are smooth as silk,
There’s no water from the sink,
Nor for showers or to flush - 
Glad there’s bottled stuff to drink.

There’s a water main that broke;
Takes 4 hours to repair.
Just before I hit the hay,
It’s all fixed - no more despair.

Still, the sky is filled with stars
And the days are streaked with sun.
All the downs are soon forgot,
Overshadowed by the fun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Leffanta Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 11:28 AM
I never thought God was operating a school for cartoonists until I read your poem above . . . .
Allison Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 5:38 PM
alls well that ends well Ilene, so glad you are safe i read such terrible news from the US with flooding and storm damage:-( hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 3:55 PM
Glad they got it sorted, you're right though you soon forget the downs. Tom
Omar Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 1:59 PM
Hope will never expire . Great imagery and choice of words. Thanks
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