The Upcoming of Me

Blood dripping from my weary eyes
You're looking at me in a surprise
Where do I go from here 
Into the deep valley of the Netherlands

The dry rivers inside my heart that weep for water
 As if it were a weeping willow
Leaves falling into a puddle after a horrid storm

My life for ever moving on after mourning for so long 
The shadows of me finally appearing after being hidden for so long
Now I'm appearing in a bold and powerful figure standing tall 

The roots of my history are finally coming out in me 
I'm showing the talents that were forever hidden inside
I will no longer have use for the pity people throw out to me
Or will I, Will I still need your pity that you're dishing out 
I don't know,but walking down the path I follow I will soon figure out
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 1, 2009 at 1:56 PM
In this poem that i wrote there were some great descriptions and great use of words to describe some of my most inner thoughts and feelings i thought i did very well i wish someone would notice my work and also like it
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