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The Upcoming of Me

Blood dripping from my weary eyes You're looking at me in a surprise Where do I go from here Into the deep valley of the Netherlands The dry rivers inside my heart that weep for water As if it were a weeping willow Leaves falling into a puddle after a horrid storm My life for ever moving on after mourning for so long The shadows of me finally appearing after being hidden for so long Now I'm appearing in a bold and powerful figure standing tall The roots of my history are finally coming out in me I'm showing the talents that were forever hidden inside I will no longer have use for the pity people throw out to me Or will I, Will I still need your pity that you're dishing out I don't know,but walking down the path I follow I will soon figure out

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/1/2009 1:56:00 PM
In this poem that i wrote there were some great descriptions and great use of words to describe some of my most inner thoughts and feelings i thought i did very well i wish someone would notice my work and also like it
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