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The Unwelcome Awakening

Dreams smashed Crash on the rocks The breeze-blocks of reality Break the silence and haul from the depths of sleep This heavy carcass Doused in drowsiness Aroused by noise Shaken from the ignorance of slumber That pulled it under Its clothes drip drip drip with weighty plunder Drenched by guilty fantasies Onto the deck Lungs spewing bitter entrails of sin Welcome to paradise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/27/2016 1:53:00 PM
JOSH, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT _
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Date: 10/27/2009 10:56:00 AM
A wonderful first poem Josh. Welcome to the soup - I relish reading more. Best wishes Janette
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Date: 10/27/2009 6:31:00 AM
Pretty good poetry. All the best.
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Date: 10/27/2009 3:32:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Josh. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2009 6:39:00 PM
Awesome write. I know this paradise too.
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Date: 10/26/2009 3:10:00 PM
Don't like the sound of paradise.... lol. Pam.
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Date: 10/26/2009 2:04:00 PM
Terrible dream. Keep writing. Sara
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