The Unwelcome Awakening

Dreams smashed Crash on the rocks The breeze-blocks of reality Break the silence and haul from the depths of sleep This heavy carcass Doused in drowsiness Aroused by noise Shaken from the ignorance of slumber That pulled it under Its clothes drip drip drip with weighty plunder Drenched by guilty fantasies Onto the deck Lungs spewing bitter entrails of sin Welcome to paradise.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Agustin Avatar
July 5, 2025 at 5:39 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 27, 2016 at 1:53 PM
JOSH, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT _
Fisher Avatar
October 27, 2009 at 10:56 AM
A wonderful first poem Josh. Welcome to the soup - I relish reading more. Best wishes Janette
Shahwan Avatar
October 27, 2009 at 6:31 AM
Pretty good poetry. All the best.
Brown Avatar
October 27, 2009 at 3:32 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Josh. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Oremraeh Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 6:39 PM
Awesome write. I know this paradise too.
Griffiths Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 3:10 PM
Don't like the sound of paradise.... lol. Pam.
Kendrick Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 2:04 PM
Terrible dream. Keep writing. Sara
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