The Untouchables

Long to touch the rows u p o n rows of coneflowers, but the bees, they b u z z, and the butterflies own. Favorite intrepid host, the red-winged blackbird, towers over the purpleness of his downturned petal throne. Eyes flit back and forth as g o l d e n splashes cool the p i n e y pond of koi. Serenity of zephyr scent sends introspective id swimming like this school — no longer in this worrisome world, exhaustion spent. Traverse the paths of no work, no play - merely a b a n d o n to holly bushes, lady slippers, roses with whimsical names. Snowball hydrangeas, blueberries like goose pimples - stand in the nether of shadow and sun, the hometown of God’s acclaim. Close my eyes - bluster of multicolored petals from the sky, cover my i n v i s i b l e frame… uninvited flocks gather in an undecided decade of “don’t know when or why.” P o s t u r i n g — shan’t get myself in a botanical lather. Have faith, the untouchables are thriving with grace, waiting for the usual feet to pass time, adorn this place. 7/31/2020
Silent one’s Petal, buds, blossoms, bees, birds, butterflies! Poetry Contest
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Deepa Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 5:41 AM
I had a glorious journey traversing in your mesmerizing garden Kim mam:-) Wonderful imageries blent with your emotions are lovely. Congratulations on your win:-) Keep inspiring.Take care.With love:-)~Deepa:-)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 1:27 PM
Thanks so much!
Wolf Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 1:38 PM
This is just amazing, Kim! Myriads of paths to traverse in your magical contest entry. Wow! Joy and Light, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 6:24 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon! Joy and light to you...add laughter! :)
Mishra Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 1:20 AM
This is not a poem but an enchanting experience Kim! A breathtaking journey of wavering emotions on which your touching muse takes me. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 5:05 AM
Thank you, Aditi! I indeed feel your poetry friendship! It means a lot!
Andresen Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 12:18 PM
- I breathe all the beauty into my lungs ... a wonderful poem, Kim :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 5:06 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! You are the best!
Roper Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 9:34 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win in Silent Ones contest. Hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 5:06 AM
Thank you, Eve!
One Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 8:11 AM
Always important everything thrives with grace, even more the untouchables.. Nice take on the contest Kim.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Rodrigues Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 8:41 AM
Thank you, Silent!
Horsman Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 8:09 PM
So good is this wonderful poetry, to be taken there with lovely flora expressions, is indeed a journey worth while..
Rodrigues Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 4:11 AM
Thank you, Harry! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 4:31 PM
You have included all of my favorite flowers. This is a Fave for me.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 4:11 AM
Thank you, Caren!<3
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