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The Untouchables

Long to touch the rows u p o n rows of coneflowers, but the bees, they b u z z, and the butterflies own. Favorite intrepid host, the red-winged blackbird, towers over the purpleness of his downturned petal throne. Eyes flit back and forth as g o l d e n splashes cool the p i n e y pond of koi. Serenity of zephyr scent sends introspective id swimming like this school — no longer in this worrisome world, exhaustion spent. Traverse the paths of no work, no play - merely a b a n d o n to holly bushes, lady slippers, roses with whimsical names. Snowball hydrangeas, blueberries like goose pimples - stand in the nether of shadow and sun, the hometown of God’s acclaim. Close my eyes - bluster of multicolored petals from the sky, cover my i n v i s i b l e frame… uninvited flocks gather in an undecided decade of “don’t know when or why.” P o s t u r i n g — shan’t get myself in a botanical lather. Have faith, the untouchables are thriving with grace, waiting for the usual feet to pass time, adorn this place. 7/31/2020
Silent one’s Petal, buds, blossoms, bees, birds, butterflies! Poetry Contest

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Date: 8/3/2020 5:41:00 AM
I had a glorious journey traversing in your mesmerizing garden Kim mam:-) Wonderful imageries blent with your emotions are lovely. Congratulations on your win:-) Keep inspiring.Take care.With love:-)~Deepa:-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2020 1:27:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 8/2/2020 1:38:00 PM
This is just amazing, Kim! Myriads of paths to traverse in your magical contest entry. Wow! Joy and Light, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2020 6:24:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon! Joy and light to you...add laughter! :)
Date: 8/2/2020 1:20:00 AM
This is not a poem but an enchanting experience Kim! A breathtaking journey of wavering emotions on which your touching muse takes me. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2020 5:05:00 AM
Thank you, Aditi! I indeed feel your poetry friendship! It means a lot!
Date: 8/1/2020 12:18:00 PM
- I breathe all the beauty into my lungs ... a wonderful poem, Kim :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2020 5:06:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! You are the best!
Date: 8/1/2020 9:34:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win in Silent Ones contest. Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2020 5:06:00 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 8/1/2020 8:11:00 AM
Always important everything thrives with grace, even more the untouchables.. Nice take on the contest Kim.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2020 8:41:00 AM
Thank you, Silent!
Date: 7/31/2020 8:09:00 PM
So good is this wonderful poetry, to be taken there with lovely flora expressions, is indeed a journey worth while..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2020 4:11:00 AM
Thank you, Harry! :)
Date: 7/31/2020 4:31:00 PM
You have included all of my favorite flowers. This is a Fave for me.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2020 4:11:00 AM
Thank you, Caren!<3

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