The Unrighteous Servant

the captive promise                                                                                                       
symbolic lies lume mingled                                                                                          
rebuke the corrupt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 7, 2010 at 12:08 PM
Interesting use of imagery and alliteration. Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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