The Unquenchable Thirst

Trying to quench the unquenchable thirst
Transfixed on your warm soft succulent lips
Like a moth I surrender to desires burning flame
Indelibly engraved on my heart
Your and your's alone heavenly name.

Lost in your soft warm enticing landscape
I explore every contour and vale
With tender loving kisses
Leaving a silver trail.

You are the lavish feast that I had hungered for so long
Your famine womanly wiles  take me to the most beautiful places
Never ventured before
I feel so privileged and so thankful
Yo be with an angel
Who lets me sail to the sunset of her shore.

As waves of love and passion grow stronger
And we dance in loves eternal flame 
We become one and no longer two
So much giving and giving
As you give yourself to me
And I to you.



Peter Dome.Copyright.2015. June.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/7/2015 11:36:00 AM
Pete I love this....I hope you find her...Tim
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Date: 6/7/2015 2:41:00 PM
Awe thanks Tim. think I've got more chance of finding someone on Mars. The human race would soon be extinct if it were left to me. Women over here seem to demand perfection when they are far from perfect themselves. I give up. but thanks Pete.
Date: 6/6/2015 3:19:00 PM
Wow! This piece is wonderful. Its filled with a deep and committed love. I sensed the passion and dersire as well within this remarkable write.Outstanding :) Alexis
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Date: 6/7/2015 3:28:00 AM
Thank you Alexis, hope you are ok. yes love not just lust in a loving relationship. thank you so much. so glad you enjoyed it and great to hear from you. take care my friend. best wishes. Pete.
Date: 6/6/2015 8:43:00 AM
If we can get Congress to pass the "Peter Dome Theory" that will be the end of divorce courts....A good one...Thanks
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Date: 6/7/2015 3:31:00 AM
Wow Judy. I'm blown away by your kind words. what a lovely thing to say. thank you very much, you're so kind.my warmest best wishes. take good care. Pete.
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